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Antigonish Review
# 130
| Carolyne Van Der Meer |
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The Inanimate World by Robert Strandquist. Vancouver, B.C.:
Anvil Press, 2001. 179 pp. $16.95.
Stubborn Bones by Karen Smythe. Vancouver, B.C.:
Polestar, 2001. 177 pp. $18.95. |
In a recent issue of Saturday Night, book reviewer/journalist
Frank Moher wrote a commentary claiming that "short-story collections
are clogging our bookshelves and choking our literature"1 and that
we must simply stop writing them. But when they are as good as the recent
offerings by Robert Strandquist and Karen Smythe, one can't help but disagree.
Strandquist's The Inanimate World is well named - it is a collection
of stories surrounding events, notions, reactions that take place within
the realm of the emotional, the intellectual, even the unconscious. And
Strandquist is masterful at capturing the fierce momentum of this supposedly
inactive place. Themes of substance abuse, broken relationships, frail
families and the miracle of birth abound here, with Strandquist oddly
capable of writing convincingly from the female perspective.
The first story, from which the collection takes its title, deals with
a narrator who drinks far too much - and his souring relationship with
girlfriend Lucille. As the story opens, they are in and out of parties,
often inebriated, and often crossing paths with one Susan Henry, a friend
of Lucille's who has our narrator under a strange spell. Though he never
actually talks to her, he is completely infatuated with the person he
thinks she should be.
But the story is actually much more complicated than this. Lucille becomes
pregnant and there is a war over whether she should keep the child. One
abortion was enough for Lucille; she wants this child, whether our narrator
does or not. A miscarriage speeds this relationship to its end and the
narrator finally seeks help for his drinking problem. At a party sometime
later, when he only drinks juice, he runs into Susan Henry, has an innocuous
conversation with her and discovers that Lucille has since married and
had two sets of twins. The narrator's life has a kind of ridiculous immaturity
about it, strategically concocted by Strandquist to get to the serious
issues beneath.
Strandquist is skilled in this strategy, couching the more weighty of
his themes in what seem to be meaningless, inane events, but which are,
in fact, often catalysts for a deeper understanding of life and hope for
the future. This is particularly true of four stories in the collection,
which can be read as stand-alone texts, but which are completely integral:
"Collecting Shadows," "The Car," "Clean Room"
and "Turn Me On, Dead Man." It takes some time to make the connection
between them, but once it's made, the stories are the more powerful for
it.
The first of these, "Collecting Shadows," is a Naked Lunch-like
tale of Doug's past and present - from his childhood obsession with bombs
and explosives to his adulthood obsession with train tracks and suicide.
The story's disjointed style actually enhances the fact that Doug is emotionally
unstable and lends credence to the disturbing environment of the institution
in which he resides. In "The Car," we become better acquainted
with Doug's father, Stan, who appeared briefly in "Collecting Shadows"
as a crotchety old man, mortally afflicted with Parkinson's disease, who
has rarely had a kind word for Doug. In this story, Stan decides to leave
the care of the residence, despite his doctor's advice, buy a '79 Oldsmobile
and drive it to the Rockies enroute to visiting his sons. He knows his
Parkinson's will render him incapable within only a short time, but he
presses on, needing this taste of freedom, all the while feeling his dead
wife's encouragement.
In "Clean Room," we meet Kathy, wife of Stan and mother of
Doug. She has just gotten a management position at a bank - a bank which
endures four hold-ups during her tenure there. In her reflections, we
gather that Stan is a serious alcoholic and that, despite his love for
her, he competes with her for the affection of their three sons. We learn
that Doug can't hold a job, that Larry and Don are pursuing musical careers
with the encouragement and support of their mother - and we discover along
with Kathy that she is suffering from Lupus and that her life will be
cut short.
In "Turn Me On, Dead Man," the boys participate in some kind
of musical audition and their performance disappoints their mother. Suddenly
Kathy appears not so much as encouraging and supportive, but as a mother
who lives through her sons and pushes them beyond their own desires. In
fact, it is in this story that we best understand Doug's choice to simply
not cope with reality. His mother tells him that "all he needs is
to want it bad enough," and he realizes that he doesn't want anything
badly enough. The boys eventually give up on their musical careers, move
away and begin adult life. For Doug, the scene turns again to the institution,
where we see his instability highlighted.
These stories, despite their almost depressing intensity, are brilliant
- in themselves and in their connection to one another. Slowly, revealing
only bits at a time, Strandquist allows the pieces of the puzzle to come
together - and before you even realize it, these characters have taken
on not just a one-dimensional existence, but a multi-dimensional one.
And the layered problems of family life are more justly explored because
of the varying perspectives.
While these stories steal the focus for this reviewer, the others in
Strandquist's collection are not without merit. Terry's realization that
real family ties can exist without blood relations in "Real Family,"
Mara's release from her prison of freedom through the discovery that she's
pregnant in "Frank's Friends" and the odd dependence between
the widow of a murdered taxi driver and his boss in "Thrill Kill"
all provide the reader with a heightened awareness of what Strandquist
terms the inanimate world - a place where meaningful things happen to
those who wish to find meaning.
Karen Smythe's Stubborn Bones fits comfortably alongside Strandquist's
collection because they share some common themes - emotions are at the
forefront, and while the subtleties of these emotions are sometimes slippery,
they are often crucial to the story's underlying meaning. The collection
is aptly named - one of the stories is indeed called "Stubborn Bones,"
and more than half of them deal with death. And Smythe is skilled at showing
not only the emptiness death causes, but also the way in which it bridges
gaps and forces us to take stock of ourselves and our lives.
In "Stubborn Bones," Marta stumbles through her grief over
her father's death by taking up with his best friend. When the narrator,
a close friend of Marta's, travels 32 hours by train to attend the funeral
to be subjected to this odd union, it makes her think deeply about relationships
- her own and others - and what they really mean. She tells the story
as though she is speaking to her ex-husband and realizes that although
he is not dead, his absence is somehow more palpable in the face of Marta's
new-found love. This story resonates because we feel both the awkwardness
between these two old friends and the inappropriate nature of Marta's
affair with Jerome.
While death does not directly affect the protagonist in "The Tooth
Fairy and Other Inventions," it puts the emphasis on her complete
lack of compassion. Out of the blue, she receives an invitation to lunch
from Andrea, the daughter of Ingelore, an old friend and neighbour of
her mother's. Ingelore has died, and Andrea, haunted by the memory of
this mother she hardly knew, wants to find out more about her. The narrator,
who senses Andrea's troubled state, tells her the minimum, and chooses
not to offer her any more support in this time of need. And although she
feels guilty for not giving more, she sets her conscience aside by justifying
her actions: "But I am my mother's daughter, and all I said was,
'Take care of yourself, Andrea.' Then I checked my watch and walked away."
Smythe captures this failure so vividly that we are incensed, the failings
of humanity leaving us raw.
Smythe's writing shows a real tightness in "Feliz Navidad,"
in which the main character has remarried the doctor who saved her from
a suicide attempt. They are honeymooning in Mexico, and the protagonist
is fragile, carefully following the lead of her subtly controlling husband.
Without revealing any violent tendencies in the husband's behaviour, Smythe
conveys a tension that is heavy, almost violent. A simple, snappy response
seems to suggest uncharted territory, better avoided: "'You know
I don't like heights,' he said, annoyed at her for making him say it.
His tone made her nervous, because his mood could shift so easily, and
it pulled her along with it when it went in the wrong direction."
There is a disturbing uneasiness throughout this story that is heightened
by the notion that the main character needs to be controlled and that
the husband needs to control - and that somehow balance is therefore achieved.
In "Madeleine," the depiction of motherhood through Gloria
is shocking. Here, Smythe once again shows us a side of human nature we
would rather not see. Gloria abandoned her son Stevie and husband Peter
when Stevie was six. When Stevie was just a baby, she screamed "I
hate you!" over his wailing form, deriving deep satisfaction from
the words. There are shifts in time to Gloria's early days as a mother,
to her walking out, to her present life as a party-goer - youthful behaviour
for her years. Throughout, we become acquainted with Madeleine, the family
dog - Peter's dog, ironically loyal to Gloria. Madeleine's death brings
Gloria and Peter together; he calls to tell her and although she feels
a sudden tenderness for him, his anger is still at the surface. Harsh
words out, they no longer have anything to say to one another but they
are unable to hang up. Smythe, through a cleverly subtle metaphor, is
able to show that they were never and have never really been ready to
let each other go.
The best writing in the collection is found in the final selection, "Strange
Relations," a novella spanning almost 60 pages. Over three chapters,
Clara explores her relationship with her mother and her grandmothers.
Her grandmothers have both died and in some senses, her relationship with
her mother has died too. In "Stone Haven," Clara remembers a
visit to her paternal grandparents' farm when she was 12. Grim and Daisy,
as she called them, offered her magic and just as quickly shattered it,
one after the other. Grim's kindness and sensitivity was oddly contrasted
with Daisy's quick temper, and Clara was deeply marked by both. After
her grandfather's death, she carries on a relationship with Daisy, mostly
through letters, and is never able to get past her harshness. She dies,
conflicts unresolved for Clara, but peace perhaps found for Daisy.
In "Visiting Hours," Clara's mother goes into a detox centre
for her alcohol problem. Clara had known about it for years but had been
sworn to secrecy. Her mother was consciously "killing herself slowly
because she didn't have the guts to do anything drastic." While this
story seems to be written about Clara and her mother, it also offers insight
into her relationship with her father. Clara and then husband Pierce spend
time with her father and his fears about her occasional glass of wine
surface: "Watch it Clara, it might be in your genes, for crying out
loud." But what is more powerful yet is the fact that both women
are unable to move past this moment in their relationship, even after
Clara's mother is long rehabilitated. The mother tries to talk through
events - the memory of a lunch with her daughter - to bridge a gap that
has become a great divide.
Clara's most successful relationship is with her maternal grandmother,
Besta, depicted in "Telling Besta," a story about Clara not
telling her why she went to live in a residence rather than with Clara's
parents. Besta's optimism - especially where Clara is concerned - transcends
the harsh realities of life. The most moving moment in the story is a
vivid scene of Clara bathing her aging grandmother - and Besta is not
embarrassed by her sagging breasts, her rounded shoulders, her fleshy
belly, her wrinkled skin. There is a tenderness in this trust that gives
their relationship life beyond the page. And while Besta's death pains
Clara, she inherits the glow of her grandmother's optimism.
There is a maturity taking place in Smythe's writing as we read these
stories. The style gets taut and full of symbolism, Smythe's words reverberating
in their simplicity. In this collection, she tackles both the folly and
the goodness in human nature - and she does it so powerfully that hope
for a better world does not seem absurd or misplaced.
Frank Moher is indeed wrong. These collections by Strandquist and Smythe
are not clutter. They are welcome additions to any bookshelf.
Notes
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Moher, Frank. "End of Story." Saturday Night, 15
Sept. 2001: 18-19.
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