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Antigonish Review
# 140
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Keogh
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Featured Artist
Leslie Shedden
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Shark or Submarine:
How to Tell
a Romantic from a Modern
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"A mind's reach should exceed its
grasp, or what's a metaphor?"
- One Dim Sun Productions
Robert
Frost has a poem about a buzz-saw in which the dangerous machine "snarls
and rattles, snarls and rattles" in tones of menace, as if an angry
wolf or rattling snake. When it hears the cry "Supper!" it leaps
out at a boy's hand, and bites it off. We are not told whether it suffered
indigestion. In this dark comedy, Frost seems more sympathetic to the
hungry saw, than to the dying boy.
Like all Romantics, Frost's first love seems directed
toward the mechanical monster he has created (cf. Mary Shelley's Frankenstein),
the sort of creature which proliferated in many of Disney's early animated
cartoons. As the once lively boy breathes out his last "in the dark
of ether" (unlike Eliot's "Prufrock," the ether here is
literal - it is the night which is metaphoric) Frost delights in having
given the world a metaphysical shudder, a warning in the form of an animated
buzz-saw, a half-comic rebuke to the worshippers of machine technology,
in the time-honored Romantic tradition, which prefers to study causes,
not effects.
One might sum it all up in the little epigram concocted
by one of Frost's admirers:
Be thou as sharp as a trap
But dull as a wise old saw.
Frost's buzz-saw has teeth of course, and it uses them
to cut sweet-smelling sticks of wood for the kitchen stove. What seems
today merely metaphoric was once nothing of the kind. In the Neolithic
age the first saws and scythes consisted of a curved branch in which were
embedded rows of animal teeth. Much technology simply amplified simple
bodily functions, as the hammer does the human arm and fist, or the dagger
the tooth. But what comes after the Aftermath? Those who know that the
-math in this word is the simple medieval past participle of mow will
answer, "The Grim Reaper." Thus Frost's buzz-saw mimicks the
all-devouring jaw of Death.
The romantic poet loves to animate and personify, perhaps
in a quest for new Gods, or neglected ones, and he communicates this preference
in the way he approaches images of technology. In his poem "The Submarine,"
Canadian poet E.J. Pratt, a Newfoundlander by birth, presents his readers
with a German submarine conceived of as a viviparous mother tiger-shark.
She gives birth to blood-scenting mutinous young, which turns out to be
a meticulously technical description of the submarine launching her torpedoes,
and mortally wounding an Allied ship. Driven by turbines at fifty miles
an hour, their underwater speed makes this naval disaster a foregone conclusion.
And then,
The submarine, like the deep-sea shark,
Went under cover, away from the light
Unlike the Romantic, the Modern poet uses technological
imagery very differently. Pratt has also written a poem "The Shark,"
whose imagery is modern rather than romantic. It does not look for organic
equivalents of the technological, but just the opposite, technical images
for a living shark. Its style is in the Imagist tradition of Chicago's
Carl Sandburg. The shark's dorsal fin is described as:
Like a piece of sheet-iron,
Three-cornered,
And with knife-edge
Stirred not a bubble
In the next stanza we are told:
His body was tubular
And tapered
And smoke-blue
almost like the barrel of a rifle, or the
great grey guns of a battle-ship. It possesses
... a double row of white teeth
And eyes of metallic grey
Hard and narrowed and slit
Then out of the harbour
With that three-cornered fin
Shearing without a bubble the water
Tubular, tapered, smoke-blue
Why do Romantic writers personify technology? Why do
Modern writers robotize it? Perhaps because one group of writers is studying
its causes, and the other its effects on human culture and the human psyche.
Is it because some Romantic writers worship technology? Consider Walt
Whitman's and Stephen Spender's panegyrics on the steam locomotive. Do
they view the creators and custodians of such power as little less than
Gods? Adam was promised divine status by the serpent, and his descendants
immediately set about building the first cities, and the tower of Babylon.
Is it because modern writers, only too well aware of
the ravages of industrial machinery on those who shape and serve it, are
more interested in that technology's effects on people and on human culture?
And how is it that we are only beginning to be aware of this, one hundred
and fifty years after the first modern poems of Baudelaire and Dickinson?
In the new electric age of instant information, we no longer live in an
industrial or even pre-industrial environment. It is much easier to see
things after they have disappeared. The horseless carriage is now called
the car. The hookless fastener is now known as the zipper.
Sharks had fins long before submarines and torpedoes
acquired them, not to mention zeppelins and rockets. Why do cars have
fins? Is it for the same reason that the young have rejected the winged
feet of Mercury, for the rocket swoosh of a sports shoe named after an
anti-aircraft missile of the 50's known as the Nike? And if cars have
fins (or once had, in the 60's), why can't sharks have steering wheels?*
The Romantic writer sees nature as a metaphor, in much
the same way that the Modern sees technology. Metaphors carry us across
a gap. They build bridges. They explain things, by setting up analogical
models of reality, as Aristotle tells us. And so the person who lives
in a technological world has need of technical metaphors.
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* For the Romantic, a fast-moving
carriage "flies like the wind." For the modern, G.K. Chesterton
in this instance, "The wind round the old street corner / Swung sudden
and quick as a cab."
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