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Antigonish Review # 156
| Kirstie McCallum
Review
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"Chair with Hymnals," a photographic image made
by Margot Metcalfe in 200 year old St. Phillip's Anglican
Church, Moreton's Harbour, Newfoundland.
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Some of These Petals:
a review of Brian Bartlett's The Watchmaker's Table.
The Watchmaker's Table
by Brian Bartlett.
(Goose Lane Editions, 2008. 136 pp., $18.95)
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There is scarcely a leaf in the Psalter
not stained by some withered flower.
To gather some of these petals and read -
- Brian Bartlett The Watchmaker's Table
These fragments I have shored against my ruins
- T.S Eliot, The Waste Land
As its title
suggests, Brian Bartlett's The Watchmaker's Table concerns
itself with temporal matters. With writing that is simultaneously
lyrical, vivid, and contemplative, Bartlett reminds us that although
we tend to refer to time as a singular abstraction, human lives
are composed of many states of temporal awareness. We live not
according to epochs and eras, but from moment to moment, passing
though climactic peaks, enduring monotonous stretches, anticipating
future disasters and epiphanies. The poetry shows the apparent
linearity of time to be relative, its flow coloured, arrested,
and intensified by unfolding human drama. Adopting multiple perspectives
on his subject, Bartlett exposes the emotional mechanisms that
play into temporal awareness, allowing us to grasp the mutability
of both perception and existence itself.
Divided into four parts, the book operates in
several registers, and as a collection it may be described as
polyphonic. The first part, "The Sideways 8," explores
the effects of temporal awareness on personal matters such as
the raising of children. "Given Words" allows voices
from the past to speak through phrases collected out of Bibles
and hand-me-down texts. "Breathing and Reading" reflects
on the legacies of literature. And in "Time, Flying"
the poet wrestles with the inevitability of time by means of personification
and direct address. Certain works, particularly the found poems
in "Given Words," employ fragments and lateral logic.
The voices and locations shift according to the emotional tone
that a poem demands. Other pieces make use of strong individual
narrative voices. They possess a linear drive that carries the
reader easily from initial propositions to conclusions. Bartlett
also includes two series of linked haiku and a number of poems
in several sections, for example the eight-part "St. Mary's
U. Études." Taken together, the collection shows the virtuosity
of the writer. Contrasting the vast and minute, the mechanical
and the natural, the eternal and the momentary, Bartlett moves
between extremes, showing readers a world that is at once harsh
and full of grace.
Bartlett opens the collection with an individual
take on an old metaphor. "All the Train Trips" presents
a lonely passenger traveling on a night train. The darkness hovering
outside of the cars - as much psychological as it is physical
- and the sense of ghostly insubstantiality felt by the passenger,
become recurring themes in the collection. Bartlett writes of
"sleeplessness, the broken breath of strangers, / my face
after midnight haggard and vague, / reflected against anonymous
woods." Bartlett represents human lives as running steadily
forward like the night train. In this vision, the future is as
dark as the forest outside the windows and the mind is haunted
by a haphazard collection of vivid memories, out of which the
self is constructed.
The poem suggests the strength of memory's associations,
as when Bartlett writes "I'll always read Lorca's poems in
the light / of one winter night when the world outside / was all
snow." Elsewhere, though, he points to the fickleness of
memory: "I've forgotten the names of villages and towns /
[…] Someday will I recall nothing / but how far in the dark I
was? -". Powerful though it is, memory cannot overcome time's
destructive qualities. The passenger, whose reflected image is
"haggard and vague," who is subject to the vagaries
of memory, occupies a precarious position with respect to both
the past and the future.
The poem that follows, "Ghosts of Pier 21,"
develops the notion of an unstable present. Bartlett describes
in detail the imagined lives of travelers who once passed through
the pier when it was a gateway for ships arriving from the Old
World. He concludes the poem with these lines:
Face by face, the timeless light restores them all
while your spectral fingers
touch your spectral face, and you whisper to anybody
who might listen,
"Hello. I am the only ghost here."
Where the passenger on the train merely appears
vague, the person addressed in this poem becomes literally spectral,
while figures of the past grow more substantial. This device serves
to emphasize the transience, the brevity, of our ownership of
the present. It also allows Bartlett to achieve an important reversal,
giving anonymous figures from the past primacy over the addressee
in his poem. Throughout the collection, Bartlett returns to this
idea that historic events have weight to the extent that the humanity
of prior generations is recognized.
In the second section of the book, "Given
Words," Bartlett constructs voices and personalities out
of letters and texts that he inherited from members of his family
so that figures from the past actually speak. "St. Mary's
U. Études," from the third section, "Breathing and Reading,"
responds to great works of literature; Shakespeare's The Tempest,
for example, or the poems of Emily Dickinson. In all of these
works, the past constantly acts upon the present. Certain poems
are the result of sifting through the fragmented statements recorded
by an ancestor on the inside cover of a bible, while others are
the result of a teacher's momentary flash of insight in the presence
of students. In all cases, the language and speech of recorded
history are both powerful and fragile: words carry great weight
but require a receptive audience if they are to live again. Bartlett
depicts the present as a thin moment, a gateway through which
past and future intersect and speak to each other. His narrators
are poised between history and oblivion, and the poems that contain
their stories are refractive devices, capable of capturing and
expanding upon events that are fleeting, destined to pass away,
were it not for the verses that hold them up to our gaze.
Some of Bartlett's most touching reflections on
mortal finitude are also reflections on intimacy. "Three
Candles and a Fan" is a restrained yet passionate love poem,
the more poignant because it emanates a sense of human vulnerability:
Tonight, abed, apocalyptic thoughts:
I'd want to be, if the heat never dipped again
If this north became a south -
the last to see your mouth.
The title images, the fan with its "three
blades / blurring into a phaseless circle" and the brief
matches: "our three leaping flames / to interrupt the intimate
dark - "succinctly capture the opposing poles, the eternal
and the momentary, between which Bartlett navigates. He pays homage
to emotional connections between individuals even as he highlights
the precariousness of those bonds. It is the weight and richness
of these relationships that he holds up against the apocalyptic
darkness evoked in his opening poem.
The first three sections of The Watchmaker's
Table depict the fragility of human experience, offering moments
of joyful illumination, exposing readers to a chorus of voices
from the past, and above all evoking an underlying anxiety about
the nature of time. In the last section, "Time Flying,"
the mood of the collection subtly shifts: the prevailing tone
of zen-like acceptance and gentle sorrow is interrupted by poems
that rigorously interrogate our conceptualizations of time. In
"Time Stands Up for Itself," time is personified, allowing
it to address the reader:
Yes, I am merciless,
but I am mercy too: the pea-sized egg
of the bee hummingbird, the cantaloupe-sized egg
of the ostrich, stay warm in my cradle.
Pause for a moment,
imagine my disappearance - world submerged
in frozen ink, unimaginable zero -
then call, call me back from the edge -
Vital and direct, the poem shakes the reader out
of the creeping lassitude induced by earlier reflections on mortality.
"Damn Clock" depicts a narrator who resists the mechanical
iteration of time: "I did not want silence / punctuated so,
did not want my morning / measured out by a metronome, cut up
into its / 14,440 seconds." "Travels of the Watch"
offers a romantic personification of the wristwatch, which mourns
its own inanimate nature wishing that it could "cast itself
off, / sustained by some other heartbeat." Mortal angst remains
present in poems like "The Verdict," where Bartlett
writes of the "[l]ung-filling panic" caused by dreams
of imprisonment. Nonetheless, there is a growing sense that it
is possible to rage against fate, to take possession of one's
mortal will and bodily self, at least to the degree that one resists
giving in to oppressive mental constructs.
It is a thread of optimism that unifies the collection.
Bartlett suggests that, with respect to time, it is the human
lot to grow and change, to wax and wane and fade away. Fathers
watch their children grow into reasoning and independent beings,
spouses observe each other aging, and descendents pick through
ancestral bones. Yet Bartlett shows us that those who pass away
continue to speak through the literary imagination. The otherworldly
narrators presented early in the book operate as both poetic alter-egos
and as messengers of another age: their characters are empty vessels
that allow another world to fill and speak through them. When
interpreted through these persons, memories become animate and
the poem itself becomes a gateway, a place "of welcoming
and farewell." The written word, even in the form of a poem
cribbed from advertising copy or a word "scrawled with a
pen" on a bathroom stall, offers important evidence of living
thought and feeling recorded for posterity
The final section of The Watchmaker's Table
also draws the reader's attention to the larger world beyond human
culture and temporal perceptions, through the use of natural imagery.
From the first pages of the collection, when the narrator's face
is "reflected against anonymous woods," natural life
forms a backdrop to human drama. Certain poems pay careful attention
to natural spaces, for example "A Short History of Shelters,"
which explores the landscapes of nomadic cultures. However, in
the latter part of the book Bartlett intensifies his gaze and
broadens his scope: "One Minute on the Planet" offers
two contrasting vignettes, both all but denuded of human presence.
The first section depicts "a cave dark as an ocean floor"
where "painter and poet / have no business" and "a
barefoot print / rests in sand, flower-fresh, for a thousand years."
The second a bird-inhabited island that is "all feathers
and noise / mobs of jammed together bodies and a riot of wings."
The piece eschews reflective narration in favour of focused imagery
and metaphoric intensity, once again illustrating Bartlett's control
of a variety of poetic forms. "The Floral Clock" is
a whimsical piece that revels in language for its own sake, listing
flower names - "brilliant azure Wild Succory," "pale
Common Nipple-wort," and "the golden star / of the Lesser
Celandine" - as much for the pleasure of letting them roll
off the pen and the tongue, one suspects, as for the purpose of
exploring Linnaean natural science. Haiku devoted to a weekend
maritime haunt called Brier Island and a poem to "The Whites
of Pennant Point" round out Bartlett's collection, placing
human mortality in the context of a natural world that is austere
but lovely to behold.
The Watchmaker's Table concludes with final
floral offering, titled "Pearly Everlasting and Others."
Here, the names of plants are also "given words," carrying
significance beyond mere denotation: "You imagine a planet
on which everything / has the middle name Forget-me-Not."
Carrying us from the darkness of a night train, through several
generations-worth of human striving, Bartlett leaves us on a windswept
shore in the company of birds and flowers. This is not abandonment
but a kind of fulfillment: "On the beach / we bend to taste
bits of glaucous leaves / to know in our bodies why / Mertensia
maritima is Oysterleaf." He does not offer an
Eden or an eternal afterlife to soothe our soul-searching, but
instead places us more fully at home within our bodies and our
surroundings. The Watchmaker's Table gives new significance
to the notion of "shoring fragments" against one's ruin.
It shows us a world that, while indeed built of fragments, is
nonetheless whole and rich in meaning.
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